Title: Setting goals in my Writing Course
(Englcom)
Thesis Statement: Setting goals in ENGLCOM aids students to be effective in widening knowledge, communication and comprehension in English.
Thesis Statement: Setting goals in ENGLCOM aids students to be effective in widening knowledge, communication and comprehension in English.
Outline
I.
Introduction
A. Quotation
B. Thesis Statement
II.
Body
A. Objective/Purpose of achieving goals
B. Goals
1. To have good grades
2. To be an effective and convincing
writer
3. To develop a wider sense and
understanding in English
4. To be an effective speaker and to
develop self confidence
C. Steps in achieving goals
1. Studying hard
2. Setting time management
3. Striving to be an aspiring person
4. Reading all the time
5. Reciting and being confident in
class
6. Widening vocabulary and being
participative
D. Improvements/ changes on daily
living
III.
Conclusion
A. Summary
B. Quotation
C. Recommendation
Parallelism was followed. :)
ReplyDeletePretty clear, however, you need to clarify this idea 'striving to be an aspiring person.' You may delete the words 'attention grabber,' just write quotation. Let me ask a question, are you sure of the arrangement of supporting details under steps of achieving goals?
ReplyDeleteYour thesis statement is well-written, Parallelism was followed, but i'm not sure about the order of gravity for Body B.
ReplyDeleteWorkable outline :) organization of points in C can still be improved.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure about the organization of ideas in C. Also, there are other points that may still be improved. Other than that, this outline seems okay.
ReplyDeleteYour thesis statement is very commendable. Parallelism was well followed. I would suggest rearranging body B since being an effective speaker is better in the long run compared to having good grades.
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